just some of my compositions

[winndich]

Hi @ all

I was long time absent, because I didn't have any time to write here or compose either. Now I'm back on and wanted to share my newly composed pieces with you.
The first one is dedicated to a character from a pen-and-paper rpg, I made. I think many of you know the manga/anime "Naruto". A friend and I made a rpg about it. My chara is an ninja girl with hairs about 4 meters long, wich she can move with her chakra like any part of the body else, like an arm, or so. That's why she call herself "Nagai Tetsukami" in English: long silverhair (her haircolor is a surreal floating and shining silver) and so is her song called.
I'm looking forward to read your comments, don't be scared to deal constructive critism (I hope that was translated right :sweatdrop: <- that too... :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: )

[Al]

The beginning was cute ^^ but after that, it was such an interesting contrast! So dramatic, very good, nice flow to everything . . actually, there isn't anything bad I about your piece that I can think of at the moment :think:

[Shizeet]

Neat piece, though I don't know how well it'd fit in the Naruto setting... The harmony, instrumentation, and rhymthic feel all make it sound more like "videogame styled medieval music" instead.

[winndich]

It wasm't fixed so much on the naruto scenario, but just an impression of the personality of this girl. You know: This ninja is on the one hand a cute, well-behaved girl, but on the other hand a fiercefull fighte who loves to fight and the competition. Ijust tried to express that.

[Kappa]

I know your character... ;)
I personally think the music doesn't fit her, but that's just my opinion. The music is great, though, it carries a fine atmosphere and is well orchestrated. Keep up the good work!

[Apollo XI]

Whoa.

This was great. I especially loved the intro and the use of the woods (especially the basoon). It set the mood so perfectly.

I don't think the music is fitting for the character, though. It sounds like it'd be better suited for a villain, or maybe an evil march or something. So, consider that.

Otherwise, it was awesome. I give it a 10 out of 10. ^_^

[Kappa]

Originally posted by Apollo XI@May 8 2005, 06:13 AM
Whoa.

This was great. I especially loved the intro and the use of the woods (especially the basoon). It set the mood so perfectly.

I don't think the music is fitting for the character, though. It sounds like it'd be better suited for a villain, or maybe an evil march or something. So, consider that.

Otherwise, it was awesome. I give it a 10 out of 10. ^_^
Yes, that Evil March setting sounds good to me. It would fit perfectly!!!