New Member, New Compositions

r3thsp3kt · June 9th, 2006, 07:50 pm

Hey all you peoples out there in Internet-land! Well, as the title suggests I'm the new guy 'round here, and I just finished up my first real composition this morning, so I figured I'd post it and ask for some feedback.

Mazeppa · June 9th, 2006, 09:39 pm

Sounds good.

Wish the ending had a better ending chord though, but I like it-nice a repeditive like a Battle!

PorscheGTIII · June 9th, 2006, 10:00 pm

Hey I liked that! Simple yet effective! It wasn't random like most people's first compositions are. Keep up the good work!

r3thsp3kt · June 9th, 2006, 11:23 pm

Thanks. I was going for a Final Fantasy, RPG-style background music - you know, the kind you would hear during, like, a boss battle or something.

Mazeppa · June 10th, 2006, 01:02 am

It was obvious - really.

BlazingDragon · June 10th, 2006, 01:28 am

It's nice, especially for a first try! It didn't offer as much variety as I would have liked though. If you included a brief differing section in the middle of the song it would have added a little more "freshness". It was slightly repetitive, but that's not always a bad theme when it comes to battle themes.

Great job!

deathraider · June 10th, 2006, 03:35 am

The chord progression was really simple as well. I'm not sure what to suggest on that.

Marlon · June 30th, 2006, 02:56 am

It sounds just a tiny bit repetitive, but it's REALLY good!